The first time in his life/ Gustave Flaubert

First they spoke of the patient, then of the weather, of the great cold, of the wolves that infested the fields at night.

Mademoiselle Rouault did not at all like the country, especially now that she had to look after the farm almost alone. As the room was chilly, she shivered as she ate. This showed something of her full lips, that she had a habit of biting when silent.

Her neck stood out from a white turned-down collar. Her hair, whose two black folds seemed each of a single piece, so smooth were they, was parted in the middle by a delicate line that curved slightly with the curve of the head; and, just showing the tip of the ear, it was joined behind in a thick chignon, with a wavy movement at the temples that the country doctor saw now for the first time in his life. The upper part of her cheek was rose-coloured. She had, like a man, thrust in between two buttons of her bodice a tortoise-shell eyeglass.

When Charles, after bidding farewell to old Rouault, returned to the room before leaving, he found her standing, her forehead against the window, looking into the garden, where the bean props had been knocked down by the wind. She turned round. “Are you looking for anything?” she asked.

“My whip, if you please,” he answered.

He began rummaging on the bed, behind the doors, under the chairs. It had fallen to the floor, between the sacks and the wall. Mademoiselle Emma saw it, and bent over the flour sacks.

Charles out of politeness made a dash also, and as he stretched out his arm, at the same moment felt his breast brush against the back of the young girl bending beneath him. She drew herself up, scarlet, and looked at him over her shoulder as she handed him his whip.

From “Madame Bovary” by Gustave Flaubert

Gustave Flaubert is one of the few geniuses who can describe the scenes in a novel as if he were witnessing them. He said that “The author, in his work, must be like God in the Universe, present everywhere and visible nowhere.” And the writer must find a unique word that would stick to the reader’s thought and convey beauty. Flaubert composes poetic prose. His attention to detail is noticeable in this snippet, “Her neck stood out from a white turned-down collar. Her hair, whose two black folds seemed each of a single piece, so smooth were they, was parted in the middle by a delicate line that curved slightly with the curve of the head; and, just showing the tip of the ear, it was joined behind in a thick chignon, with a wavy movement at the temples that the country doctor saw now for the first time in his life.”

This snippet describes his first encounter with the woman who would become Madame Bovary. But unfortunately, Flaubert’s prose loses a lot of its poetic allure and beauty in translation. I am attaching the original version in French.

Original text:

On parla d’abord du malade, puis du temps qu’il faisait, des grands froids, des loups qui couraient les champs, la nuit. Mademoiselle Rouault ne s’amusait guère à la campagne, maintenant surtout qu’elle était chargée presque à elle seule des soins de la ferme. Comme la salle était fraîche, elle grelottait tout en mangeant, ce qui découvrait un peu ses lèvres charnues, qu’elle avait coutume de mordillonner à ses moments de silence. Son cou sortait d’un col blanc, rabattu. Ses cheveux, dont les deux bandeaux noirs semblaient chacun d’un seul morceau, tant ils étaient lisses, étaient séparés sur le milieu de la tête par une raie fine, qui s’enfonçait légèrement selon la courbe du crâne ; et, laissant voir à peine le bout de l’oreille, ils allaient se confondre par derrière en un chignon abondant, avec un mouvement ondé vers les tempes, que le médecin de campagne remarqua là pour la première fois de sa vie. Ses pommettes étaient roses. Elle portait, comme un homme, passé entre deux boutons de son corsage, un lorgnon d’écaille. Quand Charles, après être monté dire adieu au père Rouault, rentra dans la salle avant de partir, il la trouva debout, le front contre la fenêtre, et qui regardait dans le jardin, où les échalas des haricots avaient été renversés par le vent. Elle se retourna. – Cherchez-vous quelque chose ? demanda-t-elle. – Ma cravache, s’il vous plaît, répondit-il. Et il se mit à fureter sur le lit, derrière les portes, sous les chaises ; elle était tombée à terre, entre les sacs et la muraille. Mademoiselle Emma l’aperçut ; elle se pencha sur les sacs de blé. Charles, par galanterie, se précipita et, comme il allongeait aussi son bras dans le même mouvement, il sentit sa poitrine effleurer le dos de la jeune fille, courbée sous lui. Elle se redressa toute rouge et le regarda par-dessus l’épaule, en lui tendant son nerf de bœuf.

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